Nowadays, there is a growing tendency that the population is increasing sharply in all over the world. This has a severe impact on human beings, not only for developing countries but also for highly developed countries. In this essay, I will discuss the main effects of the population boom and propose some possible solutions.
Above all, It is clear that overpopulation causes a number of problems. Firstly, one of the biggest impacts is inadequate basic necessities for inhabitants. The rising population can lead to rising the demanding for water is not only for drinking but also for food production and other stuff consumed so that it might cause water and food insecurity. As a result, famine can spread over the world. In addition, another contributor to the population boom is climate change. The increasing transportations, agriculture and industrial areas make environmental pollution because of the accumulation of carbon dioxide, methane and other greenhouse gases. The over-exploitation of natural resources for needing energy also has a severe impact on the environment.
However, It is true that there are several solutions to tackle these problems. First of all, this problem could be addressed by governments. They should introduce the family-planning programs in order to limit the size of the family. In this way, the government can impose some punishments for those who cross the limit. For example, the ‘one-child’ policy in China begins to have an effect on the world's most populous nation. Moreover, people need to consume less non-renewable energy and conserve more natural resources for the next generations.
In conclusion, overpopulation causes a variety of effects on human beings such as overconsumption and climate change; however, there are numerous solutions to remedy this issue by governments and citizens.
- The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population This is causing problems not only for poor undeveloped countries but also for industrialised and developing nations Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes and suggest at least o 78
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 61
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ne of the biggest impacts is inadequate basic necessities for inhabitants. The rising population ...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this issue by governments and citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1857293557 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5875605251 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1176470588 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33976594808 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894039363626 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683998814668 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190940659296 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705000754835 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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