Nowadays, recently the famine has been brought into focus among the developing countries. Although the agricultural university has more development, numerous people are still at risk of dying of starvation. In this essay, I will discuss the main causes and propose some possible solutions.
Above all, It is clear that world hunger is caused by a number of factors. First of all, one of the biggest reasons is natural disasters. In some areas, food production is seriously affected by extreme weather events such as droughts or volcano eruptions. As a result, people living in these regions have to suffer from food shortages. In addition, another contributor to hunger is domestic wars. Many refugees have difficulty in making ends meet when they migrate to new terrains because of social conflicts in their countries.
However, It is true that there are a number of solutions to deal with world famine. Firstly, this issue could be addressed by international governments. They should introduce stricter regulations and new laws in order to deal with violent attacks and domestic fightings. Furthermore, the regions affected by severe weather should find out new techniques to prevent planting cycles from disrupting by harsh weather. Another remedy to tackle this issue is that people should protect our environment to prohibit natural catastrophes caused by climate change.
In conclusion, world hunger is trigger by a range of reasons but the main factors are natural disasters and domestic conflicts. Therefore, the way forward might be to cooperate between governments and the public to tackle this problem.
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 61
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 89
- The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population This is causing problems not only for poor undeveloped countries but also for industrialised and developing nations Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes and suggest at least o 78
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Suggestion:
...he public to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39607843137 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8126260064 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3169332786 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149445182144 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434597490128 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460770937194 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893420108258 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306152086338 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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