A rapid increase in flights for leisure, business, and commercial purposes is noticed across the globe over recent years. There are positive and negative effects of such flights which are discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs along with the benefit of increasing taxes on such flights.
The benefits from increasing flight numbers are increasing economy of the nations and more employment. The rising number of flights makes tourism easier. People travel within the country or across the borders conveniently which results in increasing tourism. This adds up to the economy of the countries. Not only this, but it provides employment to folks as more flights need more staff. Thus, there are more vacancies for job seekers.
Along with the merits there are some demerits also. It is irrefutable that more flights give employment and economic developments, but it is also comes up with issues like rise in pollution and decrease in natural resources. Flights produces toxic fumes in the air. Apart from this they cause intense noise pollution which is very harmful. Another problem is increasing demand for fuel due to continuous rising flight counts. In order to fulfil this need natural resources like coal are exhausting rapidly. These resources take centuries to form. Eventually a day will come when we will left with no crucial natural resources.
However, these aforementioned demerits can be overcome if governments impose more and more taxes on such flights. This will put a hold on unnecessary flights also a surplus revenue will be collected which can be used in the betterment of other sectors.
In conclusion, although flights are one of the easiest ways to travel, and escalating flights will lead to more jobs and enhance tourism, but it will have adverse effects also which may be resolved by taxing more on such flights.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...Eventually a day will come when we will left with no crucial natural resources. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19063545151 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64472588462 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2062229205 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6842105263 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248691900204 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794057708003 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671849588523 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160939686886 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527846345709 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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