The world natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
Natural resources are run out at recent at recent time. A recent decade are witness of development in natural sector. Amid this development, there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. In order to this phenomenon the global natural sources are used at an alarming rate There are several impact happened due to extremely use of that material while it has many remedies to tackle these problems. I will try to throw light upon both view related sources also, I will try to posit my perspective about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious disadvantage of using natural resources. First and foremost, increasing in level of environment contamination connected implicitly fossil fuel such as coal, oil and gas. Furthermore, emission of hazardous gases carbon dioxide are emitted from cars and factories that polluted the clean air. Afterwards, this air is used for breathing by everyone and they have to suffer from some grave diseases. In addition, deforestation process has been increased at extremely high rate for producing the coal which is used in some hotel industries or other
factories. As a result, it release the CO2 or Co gases in air and contaminate the atmosphere as well as rate of precipitation has been decreased due to deforestation.
On the other side of spectrum, there are several measures to halt this problem. While the predominant step that should be taken by government, it is continued campaign to raise an awareness among people about going the profound knowledge of fossil fuel and it's effect. Local authorities should encourage the dwellers to use the public transport instead of private car. The another point is that to impose the strict rules that has related to cut the deforestation process. As well as, if anyone who break the law then they have to pay huge fine against deforestation. In term of personal, there are some moral responsiblity of them to save the environment by planting tree near by their house or work place. Which led to increased in precipitation rate and make atmosphere clean and clear this may result in increase in expectancy age.
Aggelomerating, all the points I elaborated an above, it can be concluded that fossil fuel are started to run out and price of it has been increased. So, people have to face inflation entire life. Not only problems are considered but also there are some cure to combat with this problem. That is why, I support those declaration that has detrimental impact of natural resources which is crucial debate among all the countries as well as solution would be taken by government and people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'at recent'.
Suggestion: at recent
Natural resources are run out at recent at recent time. A recent decade are witness of de...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun impact seems to be countable; consider using: 'several impacts'.
Suggestion: several impacts
... are used at an alarming rate There are several impact happened due to extremely use of that m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s used in some hotel industries or other factories. As a result, it release the C...
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Message: Did you mean 'releases'?
Suggestion: releases
...s or other factories. As a result, it release the CO2 or Co gases in air and contamin...
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...ell as, if anyone who break the law then they have to pay huge fine against defor...
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Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...o save the environment by planting tree near by their house or work place. Which led to...
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...phere clean and clear this may result in increase in expectancy age. Aggelomer...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'cures'?
Suggestion: cures
... are considered but also there are some cure to combat with this problem. That is wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'this declaration' or 'those declarations'?
Suggestion: this declaration; those declarations
...th this problem. That is why, I support those declaration that has detrimental impact of natural ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, while, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99078341014 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86696320341 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555299539171 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4582866989 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4545454545 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172880165972 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445149866638 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429780495954 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865070641978 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040744966636 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.