Due to statistic, the world’s population increases staggeringly from 01 billion of people in 1800 to over 7.6 billion of people in 2008, causing the over-population problem. A proportion suggests that the most severe consequences are related to this phenomenon. Personally, a sharp agreement is my point of views. In this essay, information and evidence are given to clarify my portion of views.
Firstly, consequences related to the environment are severely negative, including effects on biodiversity, climate crisis, deforestation and pollution. The world population explosion leads to the dramatic increasing of demands for foods and shelter. As a result, human beings start the deforestation process to meet the requirement of agriculture spaces which are threatening the living environment for animals. Moreover, the lack of accommodation for the huge number of people, especially with those living in crowded cities and metropolitan areas, causing the homeless situation. Consequently, the illegal shelter on the prohibited sectors such as riverbank or top of the hill built by the poverty people contribute to the complicated society condition. Besides, overpopulation leads to the raise of using fuels to serve people in majority of purposes, such as manufacturing, travelling or household functions. Recently reports state that the sources of fossil fuels get exhausted, alongside with the environmental pollution increasing with every passing year and causing grave and irreparable damage to the earth. Apparently, the lives of every species on Earth can be physical threatened by the overpopulation.
Secondly, besides the physical harm, overpopulation can cause other mental problem. In detail, the high density of citizens takes participate in causing mental health sicknesses related to modern life. According to numerous studies on humans, metal illnesses occur frequently in urban areas, including depression, social anxiety and even suicidal intentions. As a result, these sicknesses have significant chance of reducing productivity and social relation, and slowing down the economic growth.
To conclude, overpopulation severely damages every facet on Earth, which required the immense and immediate solutions from governments of different nations to control the growth rate of the global population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86470588235 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2467657583 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614705882353 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9876569 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.294117647 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126355302065 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321612788817 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505217772262 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727205239277 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528843797147 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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