Write about the following topic. Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people think that buildings should be designed to last a long time, while others think that homes which are built reasonably and rapidly are more critical. From my perspective, both opinions are of great significance in equal measure, and I will further elaborate in this essay.
On the one hand, the proponents of providing low-cost fast built accommodation or houses point out that such buildings should not be a burden for every member of society who is unemployed or has economic instability. Nowadays, the cost of living in many urban areas has been extremely high and people would tend to live in a house that is economic and speedy considering that they do not have to borrow at interest. For these people, it is much better to own a reasonably priced house rather than pay high rent for a house or apartment whereas rents are going up again. For example, in a big city, people often buy a small house at a low cost because it is difficult to buy a house that can be lived in for a long time when house prices are a dramatic increase.
However, I believe that people should buy a building to last a long time, which might even be a real saving scheme in the long term. As a result, buying a cheap compromise could later end up at a huge cost due to low construction quality as well as a high probability of purchasing another same building. For example, if people bought an apartment cheaply, they will have to do lots of upgrading and maintenance work for their low-quality townhouse. Thus, it appears that original investment for a decent place to stay could feasibly benefit those who might be concerned in the long run.
In conclusion, my firm conviction is that before people should consider carefully buying a house, which is good materials and corresponding to budget. In the future, governments and builders will concentrate on building houses that last a long time rather than the economy and rapid growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71386430678 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68061587735 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.7802637776 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 133.166666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259655353457 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100220887423 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973435820272 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167804521761 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598984636487 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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