Write about the following topic:
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it
is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Some people believe that it is good for a country to host an international sports event, while some
people think it is not good, even bad.
Overall, | think it is either good or bad to host an international sports event.
Hosting an international sports event brings some benefits to a country. Firstly, it will help that
country be more popular with a lot of people. When a country hosts an event, almost newspapers
and magazines will write to inform people about that. And this leads people concerning about
sports search for informtion of the country. Besides, the tourism of that country will also be
develope. When people go to a country to see the event, they will also spend time enjoying the
beauty of that counry. And if the beauty inspires them, they absolutely come back to the country
again. This helps the country develope not only tourism but also economy.
On the other hand, it also has some drawbacks to the country hosting an international sports
event. First of all, it will put pressure on the shoulder of that country. Because this is an
international sports event, that country has to try to complete the duty perfectly and be careful in
each detail. If the country makes a mitake, people all over the world will have bad thoughts about
that country. The second disadvantage is to make the pollution more polluted. When people enjoy
in a country before or after seeing the event, some of them will waste trash or smoke in the wrong
place. They behave like that becase they think itis not their country, so they don't need to protect
the pollution. Just one person doing that won't make the a big effect, but everone doing will make
the polluion of that country more and more polluted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y think itis not their country, so they dont need to protect the pollution. Just on...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...n. Just one person doing that wont make the a big effect, but everone doing will make...
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Line 24, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that country more and more polluted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, as to, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39605603764 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7253417835 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7777777778 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339069600074 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125586653142 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13325229706 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128309214902 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116469045907 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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