Write about the reasons why you (students) decide to attend your university.
ULIS is known as one of the top university in Vietnam with the high enrollment ratio each year. The possible reasons for its great attraction to a wide range of students are the quality of the teaching staff, the various opportunities, and the modern facilities.
Firstly, it is said that all teachers at ULIS are professional and academically knowledgeable. Students studying here will be provided with advanced English materials and experience exciting lessons. Teachers apply such the unique and creative teaching methods that motivated students. This, consequently, creates a dynamic studying environment.
Secondly, there are a variety of opportunities for students to study abroad through four years at ULIS. ULIS’s slogan is “creating opportunities together, which means the chances of exploring and improving in a new environment are equally given to students. A numerous short-term and long-term student international exchange programs are offered each semester and approachable for every level of learners. They help students with useful experience for their future job.
Finally, modern facilities also have an enormous influence on learners’ decision. Each classroom at ULIS is equipped with air-conditioners, ceiling fans, and projector. The school also installs the wi-fi system around the campus, which allows the accessible Internet connection for everyone.
In conclusion, ULIS does provide students with the great quality that other universities may not. It is sure to be the best choice for every student to spend their youth in four years.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72457627119 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16308095926 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3761409708 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074340177355 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246739841246 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281923872906 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433496926382 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262957665802 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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