Write an essay discussing two of the facilitie which facility should be given money from the local authority in your notes. You should explain which facility it is more important for local authorities to give money to, giving reasons in support of your answer.
In recent decades, public services and facilities are the government's most priority. However, which facility should be the primary focus of the local authorities' funding is still a subject of intense debate. In this essay, I will present two facilities, which I think are primarily required public money, are the local hospital and the tertiary institution.
The first fact to note is that healthcare treatments should be available for all the inhabitant and therefore hospitals should be the main focus of a local authority's spending. There are many occasions when a person cannot afford the exorbitant cost of medical treatment and he or she is faced with the urgent or emergency situation. In this sense, a financial support from the local government will provide that person with access to immediate healthcare treatment. In fact, this public funding does not only the hope of the extremely poor people to have the opportunity to have access to the availability of medical care, but it also benefits the government since this spending will fulfill their responsibility to their members and help them gain credibility.
Another fact to note is that tertiary institutions should also receive a considerable investment from local authorities. There are various reasons why this kind of facility need more public attention. Firstly, there are occasions on which many families with children cannot afford the cost of formal education and their savings are mearge, compared with the formidable tuition fees from pretigious schools. Furthermore, some tertiary institutions tend to force a complex of charges over students, with the aim to extend their profit margin. Therefore, the public money will help these families reduce the burden of the cost of education by providing the availability of the opportunities for the children to go to school. Moreover, in this knowledge-focused society, probably nothing is more important than the access to education.
In conclusion, the two facilities mentioned above should be given more attention in order to contribute to the development of a country. Needless to say, the standard of living is always the biggest concern of an authority when it comes to public funding. I believe my suggestions will partly help to monitor the use of the local authority's financial support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity need more public attention. Firstly, there are occasions on which many famili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30163043478 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94286201685 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535326086957 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.190666874 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.9375 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28531050782 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955465162722 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778180286726 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191535483591 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067689644867 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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