Write an essay with at least 250 words about the consequences of plastic bags and how to solve this problem?
Although scientists advise people against using plastic bags due to their non-biodegradable nature, they are still a part of our modern life owing to their convenience and versatility. As plastic bags are capable of causing detrimental impacts on the environment, the ecosystems and on humans themselves, it is high time that the government as well as every individual took action to reduce the use of them.
First of all, once being disposed of, plastic bags take thousands and years to decompose, which is likely to pose a grave threat to unfortunate animals were they to accidentally consume the material. If cast into the oceans, plastic bags may be mistaken for jellyfish and swalllowed by marine animals. Once plastic bags get into these animals’ bodies, they can hinder their disgestive and breathing systems and drive them to the brink of death. More seriously, plastic bags can cause suffocation in children in the adsence of their parents’ supervision. Last but not least, the lead contained in vibrant-coloured plastic bags can toxicate its content and adversely affect the health of both the users as well as those who are exposed to them excessively.
What is needed to solve this problem are definite actions. Although it seems impossible to completely eliminate the use of plastic bags, there are numerous solutions to ignite their consequences. Governments and local authorities place restrictions on the use of plastic bags, especiall vibrant-colour ones to lesson the rate of consumers being poisoned. Environmental organisations should launch more campaigns to enhance public awareness of the harmfulness of plastic bags as well as encourage consumers to replace plastic bags with eco-friendly shopping ones made of cloth, paper or other biodegradable materials. In addition, the security of the waste system should be tightened so that plastic bags are not tossed into water resources.
To conclude, plastic bagscan bring about a lot of detrimental consequences. Therefore, the governments as well as every individual should take actions as soon as possible to minimize their impacts and contribute to a green planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 701, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ely affect the health of both the users as well as those who are exposed to them excessive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37091988131 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0816677351 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587537091988 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1933983778 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.285714286 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190049790141 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714960061177 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398813737118 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107262893686 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450850592694 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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