Write an essay (at least 250 words) for the topic below:
One of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
It is true that many people prefer to increase the cost of fuels to solve environmental problems. While nobody can deny the benefits of increasing the cost of fuels, I personally disagree with that view because other solutions, including using renewable energy and education would be more effective.
To begin with, there is one main reason why people think rising the price of fuels will solve pollution. When the price of fuels increases, it will encourage people to use public transport like buses and subways to save money. Also, there will be less private vehicles on the streets. Because of the decrease in the use of cars and other vehicles, there will be less exhaust fumes and less air pollution.
Apart from the practical advantage of increasing the cost of fuels expressed above, I believe that other measures would be more effective in solving pollution. Firstly, using renewable energy should be taken into account . For example, instead of using fossil-fuels vehicles, people should use electric cars because they use electricity to run. Another essential way that should be considered when solving environmental problems is educating people to save the surroundings/landscapes. The government should raise people’s awareness about the importance of landscape so everyone will be encouraged to save the environment.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that increasing the price of fuels for cars and other vehicles is not the most effective in solving environmental problems. In fact, using renewable energy and education are among the main solutions to pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...able energy should be taken into account . For example, instead of using fossil-fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3671875 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0026660271 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5078125 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7254895305 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190177498634 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076667413752 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608516694492 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135086362906 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437296215646 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.