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In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area.
What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small com
These days, as a result of outgrowing population, lots of small communities in the past have changed into bigger ones. these changes have led to differences in how people live today, particularly in big cities compared to those who lived in the past. In addition, living in small communities had their advantages and disadvantages.
I believe there were two main benefits of living in a small community. Firstly, everyone could enjoy fresh air, better environment. they did not have to worry about pollution that could easily make them ill. While they were living in a fresh and clean environment, their average lifespan could be increased and more future generations in the community could learn from the experienced old. this would lead to preservation of community’s culture and knowledge about types of plants they should eat when they came into the jungle. For instance, a research done by Hong Kong University on small villages’ life in Asia in 2011 showed that four fifths of villages bears a strong resemblance among others. Secondly, everyone who lived in a small community would know each other; they became friends and paid some attention whether their neighbor was good or not, so that they knew the others well and could help someone if they were in trouble.
however, there were some disadvantages for those who lived in small communities such as small villages, remote mountain villages. First of all, they could not be provided with social services and infrastructures known as hospital services, public transportation, etc. For instance, if someone was seriously ill, it would take their family members much time to come to the nearest hospital which was mainly located in cities. Therefore, proportion of death risk when someone got seriously ill was high. What is more, deficiency in social services, especially in education also affects their children. they could not go to school and learn new things from the outside. According to a project done by Ministry Of education of Vietnam in 2010, approximately 80% of children in small communities could not go to school because of lack of schools or far school from their villages. Second, people from small places could not trade their local products with businessmen outside because of their inadequate and poor transport infrastructure. this is why the government should support and fund to build roads for trading.
In my view, living in a small community in the past had more disadvantages than advantages. they could not apply modern technology to better and enhance their life. however, having a good friendship in their community really helped each other when somebody got in trouble.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in my view, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17281105991 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82592297174 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559907834101 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.750693998 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.045454545 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101634668022 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330986605432 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305253257744 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621242799902 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176916328341 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.