Write a paragraph about 100 words talking about your family
My family has 4 people: mother, father, sister and me. My father is a reputable businessman. Although he was busy, he was always interested and often gave us life mottos for us to learn. My mother is a respected teacher, she has many great and small achievements during her career. Generosity and capability are what she is. She loved and cared, sharing in our times of need. My sister is a very talented person. She is a distinguished singer with many trophies in competitions. She is also a great sister, often taking me out and buying things for me. Like my sister, I am a well-educated person. Although I am not as talented as my sister, I am very perseverant when I do something. I often help my family with the housework and cooking when they are too busy. It’s all about my family and my family’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 666.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81045345961 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1743876527 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.2307692308 106.682146367 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3846153846 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0625280136881 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266751269116 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063947571513 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625280136881 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 13.0946893788 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.64 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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