Writing task 2 (an essay)Internet contains a lot of information, however, sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Submitted by Artejas on Mon, 09/23/2019 - 12:20

Nowadays people got used to all technologies and use them in routine to make own's lives much more convenient, but one of the most significant breakthroughs always was the Internet. We use the Internet everywhere, but to what extent do we depend on it? I entirely agree that most of our everyday comforts are made by the Internet and I will attempt to outline some key features for this.

First and most obvious is our communication. Today it is much easier to contact anyone from any place in the world only using the Internet, what is more astonishing, we can even see the face of our partner and use voice to talk in realtime, whilst our ancestors did not have such an amazing opportunity.

Second thing, improved by the Internet, is shopping. You can freely buy anything worldwide with no exceptions and enjoy it on the next day, you only need to have a bank account and be ready to spend some money.

Finally, there are also lots of dangerous things. In fact, you can easily lose all your money, be a part of fraud or face much worse situation. There are lots of reports about people, who lost everything or was arrested because of repost. Using Internet can be too risky, but if you will be careful, nothing serious will happen with you.

In conclusion, I would agree that our life became much more convenient, thanks to the Internet, but there is also the other side of that coin, which can spoil all honey.

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Average: 8 (3 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ughs always was the Internet. We use the Internet everywhere. but to what extent ...
^^
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ernet. We use the Internet everywhere. but to what extent do we depend on it? I en...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59215686275 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51078412232 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8607101093 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0769230769 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142425761101 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509388341222 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302296285599 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745715428912 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293668058397 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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