WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
News editors' responsibility is to provide real information to the public no matter there are bad news or good news. Therefore, new editors need to consider about the new which is affect public safety or not. However, many media do choose good news to report which may let the public ignore the bad news.
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Nowadays there are still some serious environmental problems, while many media do not tend to report something bad. They would choose to report some news are not that serious trying to make up the news.
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It would not be better if more good news reported. First of all, more good news reported does not mean bad news do not exist. It is necessary for us to know anything happened all over the world. It is important that more good news reported not equal to more good news happened. Some country are trying to control the new reported like China. In case, there was some dreadful illness in China but the central government tried to hide the news, which causes the whole world could not adopt some action to protect the people's health due to the information was filtered and covered by China.
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To conclude, news editors need to be independent and professional when broadcasting the news. There are many factors would influence the selection of news, but being a news editor need to tell the truth to the public instead of telling a good side of a new.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ld not adopt some action to protect the peoples health due to the information was filte...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ublic instead of telling a good side of a new.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, first of all, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65289256198 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37221175026 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520661157025 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0512351388 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6153846154 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0418688883387 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214336950439 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299293302894 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0317406779322 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255678937253 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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