you do not buy stuff but corporations make you buy stuff through agressive marketing and promotion these days Do you agree or disagree
In today's high advanced era, markets are flooded with plethora of advertisements that allure costumers to grasp the product with impressive marketing and promotional techinques. I agree that these strategies force the potential customers to buy the product .The following paragraphs will explain my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with ,the predominant reason behind my agreement is related with the involvement of celebrities . To be precise ,people regard celebrities as their idols .Hence ,they have a keen desire to adopt those items that are used by their role models considering them as a part and parcel of their lives. Buisnessman take advantage of such emotions of people and use it for their own selfish motives to enhance their profit margins. To exemplify, Lux, that is a popular soap ,is used by majority of people due to the fact that it has been advertised by famous actresses for many years. Thusly, corporations seek help of famous personalities to provoke internal feeling of customers to buy their products.
Probing further ,Company owners also plan effective strategies so that they may attract individuals .In this regard ,they offer special discount and gift boucher for selling their items . For example ,many branded companies offer heavy discounts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the items irrespective of its need .Attractive packaging ,which is another master plan, is also emphasized by buisness holders to increase the sale which proves an effective method to flock children.
To conclude, effective marketing and promotional skills are an important tools that are used by industrialists to attract humans to buy the material although they do not have any dire need of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31407942238 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85110522736 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657039711191 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.63117516 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.2 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963730970623 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404701864061 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472045729414 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724336214009 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050591192139 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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