you do not buy stuff but corporations make you buy stuff through agressive marketing and promotion these days Do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ded with plethora of advertisements that allure costumers to grasp the product ...
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... plethora of advertisements that allure costumers to grasp the product with imp...
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...f advertisements that allure costumers to grasp the product with impressive mar...
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...ith impressive marketing and promotional techinques. I agree that these strategi...
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...marketing and promotional techinques. I agree that these strategies force the po...
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...e potential customers to buy the product .The following paragraphs will explain my...
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...potential customers to buy the product .The following paragraphs will explain my vi...
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... the upcoming paragraphs. To begin with ,the predominant reason behind my agreeme...
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...ated with the involvement of celebrities . To be precise ,people regard celebritie...
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...volvement of celebrities . To be precise ,people regard celebrities as their idols...
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...people regard celebrities as their idols .Hence ,they have a keen desire to adopt ...
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...ople regard celebrities as their idols .Hence ,they have a keen desire to adopt those...
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...regard celebrities as their idols .Hence ,they have a keen desire to adopt those i...
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...o exemplify, Lux, that is a popular soap ,is used by majority of people due to the...
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... to buy their products. Probing further ,Company owners also plan effective strat...
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...ies so that they may attract individuals .In this regard ,they offer special disco...
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...s so that they may attract individuals .In this regard ,they offer special discoun...
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... may attract individuals .In this regard ,they offer special discount and gift bou...
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... offer special discount and gift boucher for selling their items . For example ,m...
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...nd gift boucher for selling their items . For example ,many branded companies off...
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...r for selling their items . For example ,many branded companies offer heavy disco...
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...ffer heavy discounts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the...
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...er heavy discounts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the ite...
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...er heavy discounts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the ite...
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...nts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the items irrespective of...
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...o buy the items irrespective of its need .Attractive packaging ,which is another m...
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...buy the items irrespective of its need .Attractive packaging ,which is another master plan...
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...ective of its need .Attractive packaging ,which is another master plan, is also em...
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..., is also emphasized by buisness holders to increase the sale which proves an eff...
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...and promotional skills are an important tools that are used by industrialists to att...
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...nt tools that are used by industrialists to attract humans to buy the material al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, in my view, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31407942238 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85110522736 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657039711191 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.63117516 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.2 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963730970623 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404701864061 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472045729414 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724336214009 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050591192139 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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