In an ever-changing society, advertising has become a vital part of all our daily media. Many people argue that it brings many benefits to both customers and companies. Meanwhile, some individuals suggest that Tv ads also cause some drawbacks. Discussed below will shed light on the advantages and disadvantages of this subject.
To commence with, advertisement is beneficial to not only customers but also the firms which produce the advertised products. Firstly, it offers customers a diversity of products and their comparative prices. As a result, people enable to choose the things that suit them the most. Moreover, by comparing the prices among different brands, consumers could opt for the goods having the most reasonable price and save a lot of money. Secondly, commercials alow individuals to better understand the quality and the main features of products. The reason is that by using dynamic video to introduce the ingredients in the product or hiring celebrities to talk about the benefits of products to people’s health, consumers can be more secure about the things they use. For instance, to encourage youngsters to play Angry Bird games, the producers have launched an advertising campaign that presents all the features the game has and everyone can see that now this game has a huge fan base.
On the other hand, TV ads also cause several disadvantages. To begin with, it makes people sometimes feel confused as they have too many options, and they find it difficult to have the most suitable one for their own. For imstance, a watch is an epitome to support this idea, advertising has brought to consumers, as there are numerous watch brands. Each one has its unique features and colors, so it causes customers to face the dilemma of making up their minds. In addition, in some circumstances, advertising could influence children in a bad way. Since some advertising contents contain toxic activities or violence, it is detrimental to see such thing.
In conclusion, the aforementioned facts have outlined the pros and cons of advertising. Its drawbacks should strictly be taken into account. Besides, it is undeniable that commercials have contributed great profits to our country’s labor market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18888888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92308816912 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9695551425 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142630081206 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372412078005 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356745918056 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796805590726 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186265096358 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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