. You recently subscribed to a new magazine. A representative of the magazine has asked you to give some feedback on their managzine. Write a letter to the representative of the magazine that includes the following information:
- detail of why you bought the magazine what you liked about the latest edition
- any improvements you would recommend
Your response will be evaluated in terms of task fulfillment, organisation, vocabulary and grammar. You should write at least 120 words
Dear Sir,
My name is Trung. I’m writing this letter to inform you about your magazine that I have recently subscribed to.
Firstly, as a university student in medical field, I am so curious about the latest information about healty habit and human lifestyle. Therefore, I find it helpful and informative to search for the things that I want to know. Since the magazine is written about conventional medicine genre. Besides, the cover of this latest edition has attracted me because of a dynamic cartoon picture.
On the other hand, despite of many innovations in current edition, I think it has a few things that need to change, which are the quality of paper that you have used to produce this magazine sine it does not meet a normal printed paper standard, and the name of the author which has some misspellings.
These are my feedbacks about your newest magazine version. I hope this information will help you and your company more develop in the future. If you require any further information, do not hesitate to contact me via e-mail: trung8a208@gmail.com
I am looking forward to receiving your rely at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Trung
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-23 | trung8a208 | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Trung. I’m writing this lette...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rch for the things that I want to know. Since the magazine is written about conventio...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tact me via e-mail: trung8a208@gmail.com I am looking forward to receiving your r...
^^^
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Trung
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, look, so, therefore, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98979591837 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87702629461 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8608626742 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214725669816 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816177062156 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986230773203 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129803083522 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105253828561 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.