You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
A well-recognised artwork needs to contain certain "one-of-a-kind" properties which are unique and appreciated by the public and the critique. In the past century, we will find many noteworthy and classic art forms which are still popular. Unfortunately such display of art has become rarer as time has passed on.
Artist like Van Gouh or Picasso or Bethoven belong to an era where people were still discovering new form of arts. Even writers like Shakespear were welcomed by many society. They mesmerized the crowd with either the new perception or a new tune or maybe even an exciting story. And the public felt like an elite when they enjoyed and conversed about such form of expression. Such form of art has established an level so high, a masterpiece or a classic, that only few of the recent time artist has only able to pass that line with their own uniqueness.
Nowadays most form of art are meant for show offs on social media. If by chance someone gains "recognition" on the social platform, s/he are welcomed to display her/his piece to the general public via television, radio or even youtube. And this "recognistion' is measured by the like/react and commnet they get on their piece. Most artworks are not an expression of the artist's feelings, rather than a stepping stone to fame and fortune.
Another thing is that the technology has enable editing option to sound and image. So, now anyone can edit a video of playing cello and add tune to to claiming he is an genious where the original genious falls behind the curtain for the lack of better access of technology or money.
For example, if youtubers or Tiktok performers upload a video/ image, it will be accessible for the world's viweing. But an street performer only has a limited audience. Hence falls behind race of beming famous.
It is our, the viewers, job to find out the real talents and release them in fornt of the world and renew the era of artworks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun society seems to be countable; consider using: 'many societies'.
Suggestion: many societies
...riters like Shakespear were welcomed by many society. They mesmerized the crowd with either ...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ssion. Such form of art has established an level so high, a masterpiece or a class...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...tion' on the social platform, s/he are welcomed to display her/his piece to th...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...elcomed to display her/his piece to the general public via television, radio or even youtube. ...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...t a video of playing cello and add tune to to claiming he is an genious where the ori...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cello and add tune to to claiming he is an genious where the original genious fall...
^^
Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... accessible for the worlds viweing. But an street performer only has a limited aud...
^^
Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... performer only has a limited audience. Hence falls behind race of beming famous. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, still, well, another thing, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84866468843 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98564396079 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593471810089 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7697750723 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895075350562 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277946760955 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333374469944 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400108145244 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424696089096 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.