You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Read the following text from a book about staying single.
Over the last twenty years, there has been a huge increase in the number of people who remain single. Most people who live alone are young adults who postpone marriage into their late twenties, but some are in their thirties and forties. One reason they often give for staying single is that they have not met the right person. Others say that marriage involves too much commitment and responsibility, or that they prefer the single lifestyle.
Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the causes of this trend and possible effects of this trend to the society. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task fulfillment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar.
In recent year, there are an increasing number of people who opt to stay single instead of getting engaged. Although noticeable, the influences of this tendency has not been realized by many residents. This essay will shed light to the causes of this trend as well as its effect.
To commence with, being singleton has become more popular among young adults due to some causes. First and foremost, some figures think that marriage has too much commitment and responsibilities. It means that people must get along with their spouse’s family and visit their sibling whenever returning to the hometown. Moreover, they are responsible for childbearing and child rearing after they have gotten married, which is such a stressful mission as some people are really busy with their work. The second reason lead to single status is that there are some opinion supporting remaining single in order to concentrate on the work. To be more detail, they think that if they area alone, they could spend a majority of their time working and getting promotion.
All the causes above have lead to several effects on both family and society. At first, it makes the population of their country be older which results in fewer worker in their country’s labor market. Secondly, their parents would be so upset as they don’t have grandchildren. It can be seen that in many families, they have only one child. As consequence, if their spring do not want to get married, they will live so lonely.
All in all, the above mention factors are the causes and influences of this trend. Its causes should be taken into account. Government should be more aware of the impact of this issue in order to have feasible solutions for that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89003436426 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51353840637 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.237121914 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124477989959 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427501404314 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669718995577 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886904444318 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815613168912 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.