You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?
You should write at least 250 words.
It is noticed widely that only a minority of people keen on enjoying classical music concerts or play classical music. This essay will indicate the inducements that lead to this phenonmenon and then submit the reasons why should we be encouraged to study and learn more regularly in this field.
First, due to the fact that, academic music genres such as classical music requires that listeners should have a basic knowledge and understanding to fully appreciate it.Since symphony is a harmonious combination of numerous kind of musical instruments, the audience might need to know how to differentiate and comprehend. Moreover, classical music depend highly on the literacy and identity of an individual and the way they perceive that kind of music. For example, the person who accustoms to swaying and bouncing when listening to music may feel a little bit strange when they have to keep completely quiet throughout the orchestal concert.
The second reason to explain why classical music is still not really prevalance is probably due to its price. Plump fee has been a challenging prevention for those who have a limited budget but still want to immerse themselves in a stunningly attractive melody of classical music. Along with the development of facilities, spiritual life is also essential, but in a developing country like my own, the government always gives priority to building roads, bridges, and stations for basic purposes before thinking about entertainment. Besides that, plump fee for hiring start performers is also the another factor need to be considered when organising an orchestral concert.
Despite all these difficulties, i still think it is benefical for everyone to learn about classical music because it can help us improve our imagination as well as strengthen our sense about world around us.
Although musical tastes and price are the most obvious factor that make classical music has not popular yet, i think these probles will not be the problematic issues for enjoying classical music in the futue anymore since the comprehension of the resident may improve over the time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, still, then, well, for example, i think, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21470588235 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83327210057 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1874373239 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.181818182 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9090909091 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286364514655 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112630627559 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738629603482 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167498779398 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09405575008 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.