In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is quite common for young people nowadays in many country, both young and mature people prefer to have an online communication rather than the direct interaction. From my daily observation, i think this trend could be a convenient way to communicate but if we use it inaccurately it could be lead to some significant problems. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this tedency.
On the first hand, since the covenience of the online communication, an increasing of people choose this form to communicate with their peer or their family. Because of the specificity of the job or demanding for a better educational environment, some people can not go home regularly and in this situation an online communication will be an ideal method to contact with our family. We can connect with our friends, notify for every the members in our fanmily about our status although we are a thounsand kilometres far from them. we also can keep in touch with our foreign friends by texting, talking and sending an email eassily through a link to anyone all over the world. Moreover, had the online communication not been invented, our world might become full of confusing because some conversation could not be organised directly in normal life especially something that are related to the private information.
On the other hand, internet communication has created numerous problems that appear to increase as the technology advances. If we overuse this , this can lead to an extremely serious problem. For example many people could be addicted when spending too much time use it and as a result they might not have enough time for social activity or working and learning so this will reduce the productivity of the individual. Another problem comes from privacy, although the internet has made communication easier, quicker and convenient, privacy problems have emerged. From email hacking to phone signal interceptions, more and more people are now troubled about their private information.
So, although the internet has definitely made our lives better, it also has the power to cause mayhem. Its impact on a society or a company is mostly felt by the choices we make while using it. But with wise use, we can be able to reap the benefits, and avoid many of its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03412073491 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87431217139 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9877436253 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141141597679 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515460855167 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463249905164 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915994946607 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611750727361 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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