You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The ability to learn new information and new skills whenever and wherever we want offers far greater opportunities for education than ever before. Many tertiary education institutions are providing their courses and classes online through internet currently. I consider this development as a positive trend because online learning has the potential to offer convenience for the learners and also it can be seen as a great tool to reduce the cost of tradition teaching method.
The greatest benefit which is worth to mention of online education is convenience. This means to say that students can learn whenever they want at their convenient time and there is on rush to complete the task. In addition these online classes are available for twenty four hours a day and seven days of a week. Therefore, if anyone wants to advances their education meanwhile also wants to work to earn the livelihood, he or she can easily make the schedule suits to himself or herself. For example, pupils from different parts of a country or even world can easily take these online classes and can further their careers. All they have to do is to be online in time. Moreover, recorded classes, access to notes, assignments, quizzes and projects works are uploaded to the website so that students can use them as their reference source.
Another point to consider is the huge financial benefit of the online learning. Online education can be a source of cost reduction for students, teachers, institutions and thus for a country. To illustrate, a person can work, a mom can baby-sit or even a pet owner can sit pets along with taking online classes and this way can save huge amount of money. Furthermore, the significant amount of money which is spent on gas for transit to campus for students, teachers and other office workers is also saved in this way.
In conclusion, the scope and reach of education broadens to far greater horizons that perhaps ever emarginated. So, many universities take the approach to offer online courses to their student. In my opinion, it is far grater opportunity and possibility to advance the career and thus it is a positive trend for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ere is on rush to complete the task. In addition these online classes are available for ...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
... these online classes are available for twenty four hours a day and seven days of a week. T...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'advance'.
Suggestion: advance
...f a week. Therefore, if anyone wants to advances their education meanwhile also wants to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94535519126 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70925302572 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546448087432 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8406930944 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.470588235 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220062009444 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732540292001 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485431443229 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140179114833 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015250291472 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.