You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It has been noticed widely that operating the sports event on the international scale is a tremendous benefit for the host country whilst others suppose it is an ineffective way for improvement. I completely agree with the statement argue that international sports event bring the lucre for the country.
First, the most obvious advantage that the host country can gain when celebrating an international sports event is: they can grab the attention of the foreign traveller and in the long term effect this is an impeccable way for improving touristic industry. When the athletes compete with the others, a huge number of people who admire them will come to the host country to enjoy the match in the real life and it will be the enormous encouragement for those athletes which can help them have a better physical condition during the competition. Those spectators will spend a huge amount of money for travelling, accomodation, eating, entertaining which can in turn accelerate the economic sector especially in hotel, restaurant, amusement park,... , These occasions are also the perfect opportunity for promoting the host’s cuisine and culture. Instead of spending a huge money for operating the advertising campaigh, now the government can show off the most enthralling aspect of their country during the international sport events.
On the other hand, the host country can also mentally benefit from these event. During the event, the local resident will be proud of their value and consequently after the event, their cognition toward their country will be more plentiful and this will be an immense motivation for working and learning in these country. Moreover, it is also an ideal method for establishing the relationship between host country and attended country and it certainly promoting the trade and the cultural exchange. The success of the event can contribute to the raise of the sports spirit and eventually, people will get involve more in the sports activity and this is a good way for reducing the pressure on medical care system.
In conclusion, not only do the economic sector benefit from inernational sports event but mental aspect of host country can gain the profit from these events. So the statement claim that host country can not receive anything but bad value from international sports event is totally inapproriate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... been noticed widely that operating the sports event on the international scale is a t...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... the statement argue that international sports event bring the lucre for the country. ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 646, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ling, accomodation, eating, entertaining which can in turn accelerate the economi...
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Line 2, column 744, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...lly in hotel, restaurant, amusement park,... , These occasions are also the perfec...
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Line 2, column 748, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in hotel, restaurant, amusement park,... , These occasions are also the perfect op...
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Line 2, column 866, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge money'.
Suggestion: huge money
...uisine and culture. Instead of spending a huge money for operating the advertising campaigh,...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he other hand, the host country can also mentally benefit from these event. Durin...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'these events'?
Suggestion: this event; these events
...country can also mentally benefit from these event. During the event, the local resident w...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ly, people will get involve more in the sports activity and this is a good way for red...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ything but bad value from international sports event is totally inapproriate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20526315789 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8166092854 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1419425562 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.153846154 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2307692308 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209294675789 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090740447338 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345480828071 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145249085124 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176773458395 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.