You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer
City areas are currently bombared with traffic congestions. The one way to reduce these congestions, is to reduce the number of unnecessary outings of the public.
People are more comfortable in using vehicles like public or company buses, or private cars or taxis; sometimes to go to places which are easliy accessible by walking. This means more tranports are on roads than ever before and which leads to traffic jam on the street, even the highways at times. But we can easily reduce such inconvinience by making some service available to the houses.
For example, online shopping or e-shopping has recently become a huge success to both the customers and the shop owners. According to online shops like Amazon, people buy more from them than actual shops. Home delivary services like Fed-ex, Daraaz have made this possible which provide 100% safe delivary. Not only buying and selling of products, people now can enjoy foods from their favourite restaurents without leaving the comfort of their abode.
Due to recent pandemic, we have learnt even schooling and office work is also possible from home. Roughly 120 students are home-schooled on a daily basis. The rest of the student body would not have a problem to attend classes from their houses at all as online classes have become accessible via Zoom or Google-meet. Evn office workers are using such methods to interact with their clients, employees and co-workers.
Although such services exist, people will always feel the need to go outside as it is a part of our natural instinct. So, the government might put strict rules on owning and using vehicles, for instances, increased tax fro owning more than one car or bike, reducing tax for the cycle owners, different time schedules for schools and offices and more importantly, public awareness on the negative effect of the transpotations on climate. These steps altogether may help to reduce the consistent problem of traffic jam that every city-dwellers face everyday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
... Due to recent pandemic, we have learnt even schooling and office work is also possi...
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Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
... vehicles, for instances, increased tax fro owning more than one car or bike, reduc...
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Line 9, column 548, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...affic jam that every city-dwellers face everyday.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11963190184 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61272094531 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628834355828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8692606014 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186515590609 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056599772591 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338573781365 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100113936001 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395595384558 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.