You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, online shopping is becoming more and more popular due to its convenience. But everything always have their pros and cons so what is the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping?
Firstly, you don't need to go the shop or the mall to buy things,which is too unconvenient to whom lived far from the mall. Everything you need is just a device which can connect to the Internet and you can choose things you want with just a click, a few days later, your items will be delivered to your house, that's more convenient than going to a shop and buying.
Secondly, shopping online can help to reduce the amount of people going to the mall and that help to lessen the pressure on shopping centre and it also help to lower the pollution rate of the city because no one will go out just for shopping.
Thirdly, buying things online can help to create more oppoturnities for unemployments to find their occupation to earn a living because the more people doing their shopping online, the more shippers will be needed.
But does online shopping totally good? I don't think so because everything always have two sides. If you buy items online, you will only see the picture ,you can't touch the items you buy,so sometimes the stuff you receive doesn't similar to the picture you see on the web or maybe the items was in a very bad conditions,for instance.
In conclusion, online shopping brings a lot of benefits to our human and also disadvantages,too. But I think we should accept the good and bad, nothing is extremely perfect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'propellers'?
Suggestion: propellers
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'propeller' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'propellers'.
Suggestion: propellers
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'locate'.
Suggestion: locate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32876712329 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20166151853 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456621004566 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.302046764 43.030603864 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151234296213 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886756651761 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072239629594 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129974849191 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734614495939 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.