Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The idea of purchasing daily use items online has been widespread in our contemporary world, from purchasing books, or booking of tickets to groceries deliveries. Despite some obvious disadvantages of online shopping, its significant advantages do outweigh them.
Online shopping has revolutionized our traditional way of shopping things, now, with one click we can order anything we like by sitting at our homes or we even can compare the prices of same items sold by different companies. Thus also providing us the option of ordering/booking at lower prices or perhaps something expensive for a better quality/brand. Buying things this way helps in saving time and effort, and that too with ease at home. For instance, in the 19th century, if someone had to buy something or book a ticket, the person has to walk and wait in the long queues for their turn. Whereas, now this can be done just with the expense of a click. Online also opened up a huge market or business models for people who cannot afford to buy a shop/showroom to sell their products, which in turn has also generated a lot of employment opportunities.
However, every coin has its two sides. As much as this mode of shopping facilitated the humans they are becoming more and more lazy. It is also seen that people are now spending more money online than they do earlier, on things that they do even use, this shows that how can online shopping be bad for your budget. In addition to this, there is also an even bigger con to it, online scams and frauds. As the craze of online shopping is booming, so does this. Hackers or frauds can make a fake website clone, which can be used to steal customers' payment information or personal details. But the regulating authorities are now improving their sites' firewalls and spreading awareness that can prevent from these mishappenings to happen.
Taking everything into the consideration, online shopping over the internet has proved its boon to humankind. Regardless of all the cons, which can be removed by awareness and precautions, the vastness of its pros cannot be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...same items sold by different companies. Thus also providing us the option of orderin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89887640449 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80725789369 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6330479254 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199276864039 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642049172397 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583235486561 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108070339541 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454298803518 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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