The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The representation illustrates the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle.
As the diagram display, first step for a life cycle of a product is planning and design because a product won't have its appearance without this step. But only planning and design will never create a good product so we need to produce it, after collecting enough materials and energy resources and consuming them.
After being production, the goods is ready to be sold, initial step carries on with packaging, printing and physical distribution. However, in this fierce competitive market, the products won't come into use by shopper if they are not seduce enough to the consumers so the company have to persuade their users to buy their goods by making some great deals like sales.
If the negotiation plan success, the products will be used by millions of people, but not everyone will like the items so they might have some feedback to the shops, the company, etc.
But whether the products are liked or not, the consumers will have to use them as they don't want to lose their money on this product. If the users don't want to use the goods, they will have them disposal, so the products are likely to be recycled if the users like them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seduced'.
Suggestion: seduced
...ome into use by shopper if they are not seduce enough to the consumers so the company ...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...consumers will have to use them as they dont want to lose their money on this produc...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eir money on this product. If the users dont want to use the goods, they will have t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49910820857 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0320381225 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122406387368 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758467118596 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091016514246 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100410323558 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102497162328 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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