You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The question of whether scientists and tourists could be able to go to remote places where has difficult weather and natural environment, such as the South Pole or not is controversial issue and now it is a matter of public concern. This essay, therefore, will discuss both on the positive affects as well as negative consequences of this issue.
On the one hand, there are several reason why traveling to remote places is benefical. Firstly, it help people to obtain experience and value knowlege. Obviously, discovery this unique places which they could not find in any normal tourist pots could bring them satisfaction of completed impossible mission. Another point taking into consideration is that travalling and discovering this special places bring benefit for a variety of scientific research. Undoubtedly, by exploring about the reason why polar bear could live in extreme minor degree, people will know about special skin of polar pear which contain thick fat layer. Therefore, it play a paramount role in develop medecine and cure for people who impact by heart deseases or diebity.
On the other hand, peple claim that this discovery waste of money and time. Undeniably, dicovery this challenging place need special ways for approaching.Thus it need to spend too much funds for transportation, accomodation and human resourse for long time of researching and exploring. Furthermore, this travelling is one of the main reason of lost species diversity in this environment. Admittedly, with the exploring of human, some rare species who are inhabitant of this remote place will be in threat of hunting and killing.
In conclusion, science discovery to some remote places could bring about a centain benefit but its drawback should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether scientists and tourists could be able t...
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Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ll discuss both on the positive affects as well as negative consequences of this issue. ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...remote places is benefical. Firstly, it help people to obtain experience and value k...
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Message: Did you mean 'plays'?
Suggestion: plays
... contain thick fat layer. Therefore, it play a paramount role in develop medecine an...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...place need special ways for approaching.Thus it need to spend too much funds for tra...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...place need special ways for approaching.Thus it need to spend too much funds for tra...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...r approaching.Thus it need to spend too much funds for transportation, accomodation ...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...researching and exploring. Furthermore, this travelling is one of the main reason of...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...e exploring of human, some rare species who are inhabitant of this remote place will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27304964539 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90024316081 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.185293246 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239470981127 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786157008664 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392017866457 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143262167686 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388126490946 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.