You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it is not only scientists who can travel to the remote natural environment, but also ordinary tourists are allowed to have their vacation in the remote natural environment, for instance, the South Pole. This essay is going to outline the possible advantages and disadvantages of this remote natural environment tour.
To begin with, there are at least two main advantages by allowing the ordinary tourist to have their vacation and some science experts to do their research in the remote natural environment. First, the information about the new recreational place and scientific data from a remote area may help the future development of human civilizations. The increasing number of people has caused fewer places to have a peaceful holiday. Therefore, remote areas are now the best gateway option for people to escape from the hustle-bustle of their lives. Besides that, with the collection of scientific data of a remote place, scientists might have a chance to find some new places for living, especially in this era where space is becoming more limited due to the increasing human populations. Second, the vacation and research in a remote area will provide the possibility to the local tourism industry to expand the business, for instance, to reach the remote area, there should be a special flight and the development of new hotels in the remote areas will bring more revenue for the local people who live in or nearby the remote areas. In other words, the human will be merrier by finding new places in this world.
However, on the opposite side, there is one major problem that might happen if the remote areas are overly explored by humans. As we know, humans tend to be greedy over anything that is valuable for their lives. Therefore, too much destruction is going to happen in remote areas because of human irresponsible activity, for example, the tourist may have caused garbage piling up in the clean rivers in the remote areas and thus it will cause flood disaster and. Besides that, there might be some illegal poaching and mineral explorations in remote areas that are reported to be rich in valuable materials.
I would highly suggest the government together with all-natural conservation agencies to implement strong policies that regulate the possibility of doing research and vacation the remote natural environment. Besides that, there should be some restrictions and punishments taken place in order to protect the valuable remote natural environment.
In conclusion, research and vacation in the remote environment area should be strictly regulated by the government and some other bodies to make sure the safety and protection of the natural resources and lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16590909091 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74177112179 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.006134198 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0625 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224194562429 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841013263767 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717204852401 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145715726711 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972744989814 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.