You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the contemporary era due to the some kind of different reason some part of countries cannot be able to develop and reach wellbeing.Thus,by reach countries help to this poor countries.However,obviously that's not a perfect solution for this problem.
Initially,assist the undevelop countries with money not a real solution.Money just be able to help for a short while.For this countries,poverty is much deep rather than superficial financal aid.Indeed, wealthy countries be able to research to reasons for this communitys.Why they are suffering from poverty and how they can manage it.How they change their life?What was the missing for this people for became developed.If the developed countries can find the this questions answer they be able to manage this people for more comfortable life.
Secondly,according to me giving the directly money just a simple and inefficient way.They should consume to money in order to found the solutions.They can construct to new job opportunities or support to agriculture relevant to country nature.For example,if the country has a efficient lands it's can be use for the raise to tomato,lettuce or any kind of vegetables or fruits.They can be leader of manufacturing of food.On the other hands,for country has a land of poor the can found the new ways to make monye.Like learn to how to be successful to trade or tourisim.
Eventually,I agree to helping this society without direct money is the best key.They can not lasting their life dependent to others.They must be know the control the economy and increase the their life quality by theyself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28346456693 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5648252995 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.5336955 49.4020404114 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.5 106.682146367 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.5 20.7667163134 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.25 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207295483723 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129930957865 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053863482846 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129930957865 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053863482846 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.2 13.0946893788 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.