You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the contemporary era,technology is became part of life for eveyone.Even,in the regular life most of thing can not be able without techonology.Indeed at home, in plenty leisure times and obviously at the work everything became more easy with this new invention.
Initially,like everything on the world the technology has a positive and negatives sides.Firstly, as a negative sides leisure time management came to first place in line.Via this new information technology most of the people spent their time on phone,laptop or tablet.While most of in this time this people don't make anything as aefficiently.Just a little part of people consume this invention for learning something or boost any ability in their empty time.Most of the teenage individuals and children just wathing amusing videos or like photos.And also reach everything as a easily cause to lazy people.Using one finger for order food or shopping online can be very useful but also is not perfect way to for society.
And the other hands,despite of the negatives aspects to technology there is a many kind of different positive sides.First of all,information are more reachable for everyone and in everyplaces.Easy reach the information could be help to raise more intelligent and sophisticated generation.Or people be able to work from everyone.Even at home or at park.Not just for the work or information using to information technology.Also,someone can be pourche a ticket for cinema,theatre or for plane when walking or eating food.
Eventually,according to me technology is could be boost of life quality.But it depent of how to consume.Achieve something,reach information or talking friend from oversea can be perfect.But should use to this new invention as a adequate.
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Suggestion: , technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41758241758 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7912034825 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.333474099 49.4020404114 399% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 369.75 106.682146367 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.25 20.7667163134 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147225968658 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957379321175 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233846300877 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957379321175 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233846300877 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.2 13.0946893788 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.47 50.2224549098 -29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.34 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.78957915832 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.