You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the contemporary era technology became vital part of life in the society.With information technology many kind of different thing change in regular life.And this changes happened at school,work or even at home activities.They could be negative or positive things according to individuals.
Initially,like almost every kind of invention with technology people became more lazy rather than oldest days.In early days before internet via phones or tablet people have to go to grocery store for purchase what they need.For examples, if they hungery they have to cook or visit the restaurant.Hovewer,within technology reach to food or something from grocery is became more easy and effortless.This can be vital and good for elder people or sick people.But for young part of people this mean cause more ponderus life.Due the ponderus life people trigger getting fat and unhealthy society.Thus,one positive aspect return to negative according to how to use.
On the other hands,technology has to many benefits rather than disadvantages.First of all,if the information technology be able to appropriate it could be solution for a lot various things.In the leisure times everyone could be learn something different with just one touch.Or while at home or even at park people can be call some one from oversea country.Even in simiultaneous duration watching something and doing cleaning at home with developed devices like a iron or dish washer.
Eventually,information technology benefist sides outweigh the disadvantages sides in the modern life.The important point is how to consume technology.If the next generation be able to learn this main point more than negative sides can be absorb.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51538461538 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52286697393 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.586603343 49.4020404114 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 358.5 106.682146367 336% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.25 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140958031481 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956248490359 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439694467714 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956248490359 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439694467714 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.42 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.87 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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