Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your opinion?
In the last few of years, the young people has been paying more attention in several crucial matter like global warming, social welfare, animal rescue and some other issues. I coincide if young generation more active and take bigger contribution than prior generation. This text explains my view for its point.
First and foremost, I am firmly convinced youth is more open-minded in obtaining information. They only need one second to see the world by accessing internet or other medias such as television which nowadays provides a lot of information. Because of this technology advancement, they could like to know the newest cases and how to solve this problem. Meanwhile, the previous generations are too busy in working and tend to slower to obtaining news immediately, they prefer finish their job first.
In addition, active youth prone to be love the challenges. They will participate the attractive activities which never doing before. Moreover, they concern to same issues due to their hobby. For example, they take a part in forest conservative because they like hiking or excursion or joining to Orang Utan rescue club because of they like animal.
On the other hand, it cannot be denied that old generation is also watch out about an essential issue. Some of them join to unpaid service community and become helpful to their society. Some activities such as collecting and selecting garbage or house hold trash is sometime doing by moms in a living hood area.
To sum up, I agree that the youth is more active in the concerning of late occurs than previous generation. Although the other one is also has more attention in that case.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...on or joining to Orang Utan rescue club because of they like animal. On the other hand, it ...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'watched'.
Suggestion: watched
...t be denied that old generation is also watch out about an essential issue. Some of t...
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Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f late occurs than previous generation. Although the other one is also has more attentio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02536231884 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63352465546 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8119834675 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147406922431 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450352845412 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509157170097 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855996710717 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575953428234 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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