Young people influenced by their peers? Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no denying in the fact that man is a social animal . In today's era people are hardly meet with their neighborhood and it also have many drawbacks on society . This essay will discuss about the consequences of this trend and the relevant solutions in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, most of the individuals of the society are become money minded to make their life luxurious and convenient therefore, they neglected to interact with local community. Nevertheless, the advent of internet technology also put more burden on people shoulders and they also doing work from their homes as people find limited hours to participate in their leisure activities and less time to spend with their family members. so, masses rarely community with the society members. This trend has make the poeple self --centered and they devoted less take to community.
On the furthernote, to overcome this problems society authority ought to organized some festival event for people get together, which leads to enhance the relationship bonding between folks.Furthermore, if government should decline the working hours for employees then it would be more fruitful for people because it give them more time to spend together. For example, Australian officials allowed to individual to do work only 6 hours a day which has led to folks come closer.
In conclusion, time management is very significant for everyone because it gives people more time for relaxtion. While, individual can also interchange their cultural values with each other and make the world more happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25396825397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81101259399 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.375884299 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.363636364 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105679123307 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375770924242 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434580039455 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632046365875 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227527061506 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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