Young people often influenced by their behaviours and situations by their behaviour at the same age. This is called peer pressure. Does the disadvantage outweigh the advantage?
Copying others' mannerisms and attitudes in themselves would be a climbing phenomenon among youngsters. This essay explains in detail and claimed the disadvantage of this peer pressure compared to the positivity which is lower than the former.
Peer pressure is one of the greatly influenced habits in most people day to day life. It often helps them to improvise and change their character and vision at certain points in their life. For instance, people of the same age have been succeeding in particular fields like content making, career and academic level. Such evaluation would enhance others to copy their way of work, study and steps to follow. However, it might lead to categorising or familiarising the entire mechanism and would have reduced creativity or innovations.
Over to the disadvantage, it often leads people to change their character, attitude and sometimes their future too. To elaborate, many youngsters insist to do malpractice like alcoholism, smoking, and drug abuse due to the pressure or support of their peers, friend or colleagues. Moreover, most of them are encouraged by advertisements from their real-age actors or celebrities. This kind of pressure might stimulate them to experience or undergo vivid bad ways. Along with that, peer pressure would make some people become introverted or fail in life. That is people who have pressure to do some sort of activities which is out of their control or interest but forced to do for the success which would be a pernicious impact on their later life to the core. For example, a career choice, job placement and marriage.
To conclude, it is inevitable to have peer pressure nowadays, nevertheless the negativity of this would be a major scene in people life in contrast to the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in contrast, in particular, kind of, sort of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14186851211 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86253086014 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4839817641 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292098652096 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092256592985 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591573592849 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166200993783 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564767988082 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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