Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. What are the causes and solutions.
In modern era, adults are behaved badly as compared to past and do not much respectful. There are many reasons behind this,hectic schedule of parents, nuclear families and advancement of technology. Despite having more reasons,there are number of ways present to solve this problem.
Advancement of technology is urgent reason of becoming less polite for adults because in past teenagers mostly spend their leisure time with their parents and do many kind of enjoyment activities which is helpful for developing skills in younglings. While, in these days with the advancement of technology they spend their more time with electronic gadgets such as ,mobile phones, video games and live alone in separate room and do not talk with every person. Even,they do no talk with their own parents. So due to this they become less polite. Whether, the possible way to solve this problem is that parents should they do not give mobile phones to their small children so that they spent more time with family members and learn about more communication skills which makes them polite and respectful. Hence,due to technology children become less friendly. However, parents should take some steps for this.
Nuclear families is supplementary reason of this trend because nowadays people are busy in their own life such as jobs, with this they may live in separate families faraway form their grandparents which put bad impact of children progress because their parents not spend time with them and mostly they live alone. Grandparents tend to more experience which they give their children for becoming friendly with everyone but nowadays children live in nuclear families. Inspite having cause it have specific way to solve this. If parents live in joint families may children can change their behavior as soon as possible. So parents should live in joint families. As a result,nuclear families is reason for this but it can b solved by living in joint families.
To conclude, not only bad impacts are cause this but also number is ways are available to solved this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, while, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12130177515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54922649501 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476331360947 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.15745685 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.066191097556 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251260465816 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242884746693 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0402030055552 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019518534222 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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