Young people who commit crimes should be punished the same as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this hustle and bustle, some people argue that juvenile offenders should receive the same prison sentences that mature people did. Personally, I strongly oppose the idea of this view due to other better solutions for them.
To begin with, the first reason for this claim is that imposing adult sentences on young criminals might devastate their future. This is because after being released from prison, juvenile people have difficulty in correcting their mistakes and getting life back together. As a result, they easily follow in their footsteps and certainly commit crimes again. In other words, young ex-prisoners who suffer from being estranged from school, peers and society, which make them quit to become a good person.
On top of that, it is obvious that everyone makes mistakes in their whole life, particularly in juvenile people who is rebellious age. This means that young lawbreakers have immature and impaired perceptions, resulting in impulsive behaviors. Therefore, they deserve a second chance at rehabilitation by means of a warning or to rehabilitation programs, rather than large convicts. Take law in Vietnam as an example, juvenile criminals committing minor crimes, are sent to a reformatory for about 1 to 2 years depending on the seriousness of the offense.
To sum up, for the reason I have mentioned before, I strongly contend that young people who engage in criminal activities should be sent to prison the same as adults. I believe that giving a chance to juvenile offenders to learn and to rethink past mistakes could be a better solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74109664912 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3503232502 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196005451587 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679529836628 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538806513633 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121641063939 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04111895131 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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