“In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?”
In today’s modern society, especially post-pandemic, many people tend to use e-commerce rather than physical store. Although it has several drawbacks, I believe that it has more benefits impact on customers.
It is obvious that shopping online would bring about a number of major advantages when people opt for shopping online. One evident strength of each person is that they can save a large amount of time as they just access the website through a few clicks rather than spending more time visiting the store. For a workaholic, for example, purchasing the essential things by online shopping is suitable for them because it doesn’t waste lots of time for this. In other words, the convenience of shopping on the Internet might provide a diversity of products to buyers and it won’t also give customers a hard sell from shop assistants when you shop around for.
Another benefit of this trend could be that people easily compare the price as well as the quality of goods through the reviewers. My mother, for instance, usually buys food or vital things on Tiki because the products in this app might be more inexpensive than others, and the response to goods is almost higher. Last but not least, online shopping is likely able to create more employment opportunities. Post-pandemic, for instance, the warehousing and logistics industries are also recruiting a huge number of employees to cater to the growing demand for e-commerce.
In conclusion, I believe the fact that online shopping is replacing traditional stores brings various benefits for people in the modern world besides the lack of drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1358490566 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74458202812 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5497509912 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.727272727 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191550655901 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776965807032 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080788907457 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116883553747 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796497085905 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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