1-NOWADAYS , THE GAP BETWEEN COUNTRYSIDE AND CITY SIDE HAS BEEN INCREASING WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE REASON AND HOW COULD IT BE RESOLVED ?

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1-NOWADAYS , THE GAP BETWEEN COUNTRYSIDE AND CITY SIDE HAS BEEN INCREASING WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE REASON AND HOW COULD IT BE RESOLVED ?

THE DEVELOPMENT OF ANY COUNTRY DEPENDS UPON HOW PRUDENT AND PROACTIVE THE GOVERNMENT IS TOWARDS THE GROWTH OF THE NATION . THE EVER WIDENING GAP BETWEEN CITY SIDE AND COUNTRYSIDE HAS BECOME A BURNING ISSUE.IT NEEDS TO BE RESOLVED BY CONSCIOUS EFFORTS OF GOVERNMENT AS IT IS “ OF PEOPLE ,FOR THE PEOPLE AND BY THE PEOPLE.

FIRST AND FOREMOST , TALKING ABOUT COUNTRYSIDE PEOPLE ARE ILLITERATE WHICH IS IN THE ROOT CAUSES OF THE ISSUE .LACK OF EDUCATION ACCOUNTS TO CONSERVATIVE AND SUPERSTITIOUS SOCIETY WHY WOMEN ARE STILL EXPLOITED AND THEY ARE THE PART OF FOUR WALLS .PEOPLE STILL RELY UPON CONVENTIONAL METHOD OF AGRICULTURE WHICH IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THEIR POVERTY .

MOREOVER,THE LACK OF BASIC SURVIVAL NEEDS SUCH AS THERAPEUTIC SERVICES , ELECTRICITY , FRESH WATER , TRANSPORTATION AND INFRASTRUCTURE HAS RESTRAINED THE GROWTH OF COUNTRYSIDE . BRAIN DRAIN TO CITY SIDE FROM COUNTRYSIDE HAS WORSEN ISSUE .LACK OF OPPORTUNITY MAKE AND ADOLESCENT TWIN TO CITY SIDE.

SIGNIFICANTLY ,SERIOUS STEPS ARE NEEDED TO BE TAKEN AS “ STITCH IN TIMES SAVES NINE”.THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD IMPART FREE COMPULSORY EDUCATION TO COUNTRYSIDE PEOPLE TO IMPROVE LITERACY RATIO. THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD AVAIL SUBSIDES AND INTEREST FREE LOAN TO THE FARMER TO ADAPT LATEST TECHNOLOGIES IN AGRICULTURE LIKE DRIP IRRIGATION AND USE OF PESTICIDES AND FERTILIZERS . THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD DECLARE COUNTRYSIDE AS SPECIAL ECONOMIC ZONES TO ATTRACT INDUSTRIES AND MNC’S WHERE WE CAN TAKE EXAMPLE OF MUNDRA PORT.

IN BRIEF BY GETTING FUTURISTIC AND PROACTIVE STEPS WE CAN MAKE THE CHANGES FAVOURABLE TO US AS “ AN OUNCE OF PREVENTION WORTH A POUND OF CURE” WHERE GOVERNMENT HAS AN IMPORTANT ROLE TO PLAY.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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...MENT IS TOWARDS THE GROWTH OF THE NATION . THE EVER WIDENING GAP BETWEEN CITY SID...
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... A BURNING ISSUE.IT NEEDS TO BE RESOLVED BY CONSCIOUS EFFORTS OF GOVERNMENT AS I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, in brief, such as, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49242424242 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12038370109 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1110177404 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.111111111 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 62.0 5.01903807615 1235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138150831308 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608610529867 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716952817753 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771770818747 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731504557254 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.