Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in a different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say:
1. how did you lose the certificate?
2. why do you need it?
3. what do you expect the principal to do?
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to you to ask if you would like to do me a favour to send me another copy of a certificate in your college.
I just passed the tough exam of the course in your college and got the certificate several days ago. I was so glad that I booked the earliest flight to get back to my country. But unfortunately, I lost my baggage in the taxi when I got off the airplane and took a taxi home. There was nothing really important but the certificate.
The certificate was really important to me because with its help I could get promoted in my company. I know it was all my fault to get it lost, but I will really appreciate your help if you send me another copy of a certificate by mail.
Thank you in advance for your understanding and kindness.
Looking forward to your reply!
Sincerely,
Pirlo
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d got the certificate several days ago. I was so glad that I booked the earliest ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42948717949 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66607334376 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6574060092 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7777777778 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205051720602 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808585690383 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635814645989 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117545369607 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577043507808 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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