Nowadays,international tourism is the biggest industry in the world unfortunately it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Presently,tourism is the major income source for each and every nation and there are many countries which mainly dependent on tourism.I believe that, there are no any difficulties occurred regarding people's cultures and their thought process.So here i will outline what are the benefits of tourism and how this industry became large.
Firstly,due to globalization international tourism has been flourished by exploring new places is the popular trend among tourist.Internet has made it possible.International media promotes new places and for visitors. Secondly
many countries are encouraging tourism by developing some places.In fact some countries are particularly focusing on their tourist and tourist places by providing pleasant experience.For example,Dubai has made some rules for encouraging tourism by applying trade free zone and Also made some strict laws for managing ease.Moreover some countries have designed some places for tourism only,like Singapore and Switzerland. consequently this countries are developed countries.
On the other side,Some people believes that it creates tension for understanding different cultures for local citizens as well as among visitors. If it is happened then there is no any countries promotes their tourism.International language like English has became popular for communication among people who comes from different regions.In fact it helps to know their culture and their tradition.Many underdeveloped countries have come up with encouraging their tourism. Tourism is the best way to grow economy.
To sum up,Tourism is the easy way to boost country's economy.I think of understanding different cultures
is not a major issue as far as tourism concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, i think, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.892 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48172141332 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.646721854 49.4020404114 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.125 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.25 7.06120827912 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139786775765 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722275966962 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314269382804 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743842948062 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386536110778 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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