Various measures had been taken by the government to compete with congesting issue which is becoming the primary concern of most megacities worldwide. Among these measures, shifting business outside the urban area plays a significant role, however, whether it is a perfect solution spark much debate. This essay intends to evaluate its pros and cons from various perspectives.
The advantages of moving the business to rural area general boil down to one thing: money. Ruralizing factory releases the stress of the commute traffic and provides more convenience to the society as the ambulance car and school bus spend less time on the road. In the meantime, the government could also save the cost on municipal construction and relocate funds to tackle more stringent issues, such as education, wellness and environment. Moving the business to the suburb could also improve rural economics by increasing job opportunities to cater to employees’ daily demand. In the meantime, the enterprises are able to bring down the operation cost which indirectly beneficial to people a lower living cost. Also, shift the business and factory to the suburb could reduce the air pollution of the city which accommodates most urban residents.
However, many people might argue that professionals and workers would spend more time on commute approach to their jobs in the suburb. Working in rural area also put those employed individuals into a dilemma, if stay in the city which nearby their children’s school or stay in the suburb that adjoining to their workplace. Few can deny that juveniles’ education is usually the focus of every household.
To conclusion, shifting business outside the urban area will contribute individuals a better environment in the long run. However, the government should also provide affiliated facilities to the ruralised factories.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42123287671 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93439198379 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.857801516 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137057148544 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476491151589 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654848110869 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714713137982 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393877913701 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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