Adults do very less exercise these days.
Some people think that showing sporting events on the television such as Olympics and World Cup tournaments can be the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Others believe there are other effective ways to do so.
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Many people hold that in order to motivate them to be active depicting sports events such as the Olympics or World cup will help, whereas others deem that different approaches should be utilized. This essay will discuss both sides and provide my opinion that other methods are more effective in encouraging people to keep fit.
To begin with, according to many there is a tremendous impact on fitness because of watching famous sports on TV or in-person as people play these sports personally. In addition, seeing sports give adrenaline rush, and also encourages individuals to take up sports. In India, for instance, a majority of people is an ardent fan of cricket so they often play cricket or do some other physical activity only after watching it. Consequently, these games affect the public's choice of playing outdoors and quit their sedentary life.
However, incorporating other methods such as local or regional events inspire the public to engage in health and fitness activities. this can be successfully achieved by funding from the government and societies. Organizing events, for instance, Yoga, Swimming, and Marathons will provide a platform to the public so that they can imbibe it as part of their lifestyle. Therefore, the effects of experience after participating in activities have enormous impact in doing exercise.
To conclude this, many people think that watching sports influence healthy lifestyle, while I agree with those who think that different approaches are more effective. Hence, in the future, I would recommend to increase participation in activity events in order to stay healthy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32945736434 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77036086909 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1775526524 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.583333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238626729376 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770079939565 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489389811281 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13613570634 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493918842244 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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