Advertisements have impacted our modern world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.
Advertisements have impacted our modern world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.
Advertisements have become an effective element for businesses around the world; the modern age has been impacted by advertising in several ways. Merits and demerits will be discussed below.
On the positive side, advertising is an efficient marketing tool which can easily inform customers about their demands’ choices. In other words, different kinds of advertisements through television, signboards and websites help people to have a wide choice to get their requirements; therefore, they can make a choice without the need to go to markets. Moreover, it helps consumers to buy their needs online after getting the information about any item from advertisements’ tools. For instance, two years ago, I purchased my previous mobile after watching many advertisements about it on YouTube channels.
On the negative side, advertising can provide misleading information and fake claims about products in order to raise their sales. Not only does advertisement encourage excessive consumption but also it creates a gap between community members. As an illustration, it has the ability to easily reach consumers from different financial statues and different generations. Furthermore, children have been influenced by products’ variety through commercials and add pressure on their parents’ shoulders to buy their requirements. For example, my friend said that he bought his son a toy online and he found that it did not have the same features as the advertisement showed.
In conclusion, the power of advertising has shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses. Therefore, people should be more careful about the negatives and the positives of advertisements. It is highly recommended that people should focus on their needs and not getting influenced by the spreading of commercials and purchasing products they do not need.
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- You are relocating to a new city Write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family In your letter you should tell when you will relocate why you are relocating what kind of house you want 73
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- You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item.Explain where and when you left itSay what action you would like the company to take write at least 150 words. 73
- The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber crime and ensure safety of users To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- International air fares are falling and tourism is growing What are advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d purchasing products they do not need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63087248322 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37209587411 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8301917657 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303714894639 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125816407582 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184267380695 0.0667982634062 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303371629663 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.358821358369 0.056905535591 631% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.