All education and healthcare should be funded by government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Education and good health are the basic rights of individuals. It is argued by some people that complete studies and medical care should be financed by government and without any cost to the people. I strongly agree and believe that these utilities are the backbones for any nation to grow and have a safe environment.
Firstly, uneducated people cannot do skilled jobs that means they are unable to earn sufficient money in this world to feed their family, thus education must be supported by the authority to minimize the illiterate percentage. Education is the only way to eradicate poverty from the society, thus government must support their people to make the education free of any cost, so that people can become capable to do various skilled jobs and independent. A recent survey revealed that 90 percent uneducated people are living in below poverty line of society.
Secondly, health support is vital to maintain the disease free environment, thus government should provide funds for the people to get free medical care. For instance, deadly infections like polio can easily spread from one to another therefore, polio vaccination by Indian government is provided every year in government hospitals to make the nation polio free zone. Hence authorities must support individuals financially to eradicate these infections and for the protection of other living individuals, especially where individuals cannot afford these costly medicines.
In conclusion, I believe that education and health expenses should be controlled by the government in terms of financial requirements to support growth and healthier life style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40234375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8215538949 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4644741861 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.3 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215333037753 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846908504472 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496874193452 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130147503549 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109868384153 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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