All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity,
How could it be tackled?
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><span style="font-kerning: none">Obesity nowadays has become a number one dilemma and life threaten across the world. A plethora of diseases have accompined with it. This serious issue impact adults and childeren productivity and makes them extremely dependent on their families. This essay aims to discuss the reason of obesity and it will also provide some solutions to mitigate it among people. </span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51); min-height: 15px;"><br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><span style="font-kerning: none">To begin with, there is no doubt that becoming overwiegh and obese rely on several factors. First of all, the human being life style. For instance, most of the individuals these days are eating invaluable food via some fast food restaurants due to their tight daily schedule, hece, they calim that they have insufficent times to cook their mael by themselves. Yet, these meals might be considerably cheap and afforadble, and served quickly, but unfortuanely it’s lacked of some significant healthy ingreadiants that our body need it. Second of all, low physical activities also is plying a crucial role in gaining high weight. To illustrate, there is a conspicious link between inactivity and obesity, which means that people who are doing a low physical activities such as jogging, walking or cycling are most likly to syffer form getting too much weight in the foressable future.</span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51); min-height: 15px;"><br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><span style="font-kerning: none">On the flip side there are some ways might alleviate the dangerous influence of obesity. Firstly, increase the public awarness. To put differently, to talk out loaud through social media paltformes as an example about the dangerous affect of obesity. It’s irrefutable that many people have no adequate data about this disease and how much it costs the governemnt yearly and what are accompined diseases for obesity. The Minster Of Health in Saudi Arabia for example has recently released a study on obesity. This report has shown the percentage of obese people in Saudi Arabia. Moreover, it also listed some fatal diseas that accompanied with it such as Hypertension, Diabetus, Insomina and more disease. Such these inforamtion was unknown for many people over many years there. Therefore, individuals started to take this issue in their consideration. Secondly, surgical and non-surgical solutions might be effective to overcome such problem. For instance, there are various method indeed participate in lowering people weight. The bariatric surgical procedures is a one of famous exmaple of fighting obesity for ever. Obese patients nowadays resort to such surgical solutions as it very effective settelement for their problem. </span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51); min-height: 15px;"><br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><span style="font-kerning: none">to sum up, there are lots of reasons that stand behind obesity such as the wrong life style. However, obesity can be cured by some solutions as surgical intervention or by enhance awarness of the serious problem that accompanied with it. </span></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1318, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...hat people who are doing a low physical activities such as jogging, walking or cycling are...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4177.0 1615.20841683 259% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 580.0 315.596192385 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.20172413793 5.12529762239 141% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.66302519331 2.80592935109 202% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477586206897 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1124.1 506.74238477 222% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 249.820411867 49.4020404114 506% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.608695652 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2173913043 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26086956522 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804211003248 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473559744689 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374399029489 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639355202982 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433882759542 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.78 12.4159519038 200% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 78.4519038076 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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