All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Obesity is a growing problem in present days throughout the world which is resulting various health issues. Regardless of age i.e. both kids and adults are suffering from this common health issue. this essay will discuss different causes of increasing percentage of having unwanted weight and ways to get rid of it.
Let's check out few reasons behind rising weight among the different age groups. Firstly, one of the biggest points responsible for this is food habit that we follow nowadays. As an example, being a working individuals, mostly people skip their meals due to huge work load which leads ultimate time gap that may affect one's health badly. Secondly, following unhealthy or fast foods available in market in order to reduce cooking time. this is completely dangerous for increasing excessive weight gain. having red meat daily basis can lead one to having unnatural weight within very short time span. Thirdly, last but not the least, we spend very less time for proper workout daily basis which can assure one to reduce extra fat from body. daily exercise is one of the vital part to keep one's body flexible as well as healthy.
In other hand, there is a big question for every person that how to get rid of this? mostly, people gain weight and join gym or yoga classes to keep their unhealthy living in a proper track. there are few points that we need to remind in order to tackle this common rising issue, such as:
1. Managing personal and professional life to stay healthy
2. following proper diet to get in shape
3. Sharing the same awareness to others
In conclusion, people from every ages must be knowing about the facts of rising additional weight and ways to dealing with the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93581081081 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27723503341 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628378378378 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3175972083 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180117777834 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545293221633 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516649964728 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659162782483 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06471176109 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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