Although, parents are responsible for raising a child. However, outside influences plays an important role in their development. To what extent do you agree with the above mentioned statement. Give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era, raising a child has become more difficult as compare to the past. It is argued that parents are completely responsible for their kids development whereas others assert that there are certain outside facts that plays a crucial role in children's growth. I completely
agree with the above mentioned statement and give my opinion with plausible examples.
it is undeniable fact that parents plays an indispensable role to rise their kids. Parents are the only one with whom children spend their most of the time and have a great influence of their fosters. For example, a child learn his or her native language without any extra effort just by observing their deeds.
To commence with, first and foremost, schools and colleges have a great influence on children's life. For instance, jauvinials get chance to learn new skills and take part in many activities which help them to earn a lucrative amount. Children meet new people and make friends which help them to develop a felling of team-work. They learn importance of good etiquettes.
Furthermore, outside activities enhance youngsters self esteemed and develope a problem solving skills. Children can understand the reality of the life and how to cop with adverse situations.
To recapitulate, after considering all the facts about outside influences and its importance, the role of parents can not be avoided. They are the one who teach children all the basic skills and etiquettes.
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- Some people believe that people learn foreign language in order to travel to or work in foreign country. Others say there are many reasons to learn a foreign language. Discuss the both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Although parents are responsible for raising a child However outside influences plays an important role in their development To what extent do you agree with the above mentioned statement Give your own opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74757791148 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634453781513 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1657061645 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312159093577 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931675253758 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771075170563 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152494673055 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856373298691 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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