Despite the vital role of arts in a culture, nowadays, few people tend to neglect arts and focus more to science, business and technology. In this essay, I will explain the reason and suggest the possible solution to overcome this issue.
To begin, there are several reasons for people to embrace other sectors than arts. Firstly, we have a misconception in our society that arts sector is unable to create a secure job in future. For example, In a job posting site, a single search will reveal that a tiny fraction of jobs with better payments are available compared to other sectors. As a result, people establish their career in different areas than arts. Secondly, Art is creativity. It is a natural gift which can not be gained from university or books. Hence, people find quite difficult to be an expert in arts rather than other areas.
To solve this issue, the government needs to play a vital role. Firstly, need to ensure the basic needs of all people. One clear example is, in a developing country, people are still struggling to have their basic needs such as food, education, medical assistance. When someone is hungry, It will not be easy to see appreciation regarding arts. Secondly, both private and public sectors need to work together to create better job opportunity to attract people in this sector.
To conclude, arts uphold the root of a country’s culture and heritage. Through the arts, the history a nation pass from generation to generation. Therefore, the government needs to work productively to raise awareness among people while working on to ensure basic needs. Consequently, this will lure more people towards arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96402877698 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62545576229 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3628513886 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152651128707 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510418932918 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496638655703 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964931999834 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297422521764 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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